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Summary

  • Chapter 7 (Type-Driven Metamorphosis): Add Laozi quotation and restructure content to match Japanese version, focusing on union types and being property
  • Chapter 8 (Reason Layer): Complete rewrite with Leibniz's Principle of Sufficient Reason, explaining dual meaning of "reason" and raison d'être concept
  • Chapter 9 (Error Handling): Add Edison quotation, simplify structure, and enhance structured data explanation

Key Improvements

Philosophical Foundation

  • Laozi (Chapter 7): Natural emergence and type-driven transformation
  • Leibniz (Chapter 8): Everything has a reason for existence
  • Edison (Chapter 9): Positive view of meaningful failures

Content Quality

  • Consistent structure between Japanese and English versions
  • Enhanced raison d'être explanation in Chapter 8
  • Improved semantic exception concepts in Chapter 9
  • Streamlined code examples and clearer explanations

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  • Verify all chapter links work correctly
  • Check philosophical quotations are properly formatted
  • Ensure Japanese and English versions are consistent
  • Validate all code examples use proper syntax

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  • Documentation

    • Revamped “Type‑Driven Metamorphosis” with multi‑destiny workflows and new example entities (payment, classification, continuation).
    • Rewrote “Reason Layer” into a two‑pronged model (type‑matching vs existence) with delegation examples and style/greeting samples.
    • Overhauled “Error Handling” to domain‑centric failures (structured, multilingual messages).
    • Updated “Semantic Variables” to class‑based pre/postcondition examples.
    • Added “Semantic Logging” guide, “Reference” page, and a Japanese philosophy article.
  • Chores

    • Reorganized navigation, section numbering and titles.

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Chapter 7 (Type-Driven Metamorphosis):
- Fix header from Chapter 8 content to proper Chapter 7
- Restore Laozi quotation and core type-driven concepts
- Maintain focus on union types and being property

Chapter 8 (Reason Layer):
- Add profound Heidegger quotation on tool-being
- Introduce dual meaning of "reason" (raison d'être)
- Clarify difference from traditional dependency injection
- Explain reason classes as ontological capabilities
- Add delegation pattern explanation

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- Replace Heidegger with Leibniz's Principle of Sufficient Reason
- Simplify delegation explanation, remove complex double dispatch discussion
- Maintain core raison d'être concept and #[Inject] comparison
- Clarify "what to become" vs "how to achieve that state" separation
- Preserve philosophical depth while improving accessibility

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Chapter 7 English:
- Add Laozi quotation on natural emergence (Tao Te Ching 42)
- Restructure content to match Japanese version structure
- Focus on type-driven metamorphosis and being property
- Include AMD future concepts and control structure elimination

Chapter 8 English:
- Add Leibniz Principle of Sufficient Reason quotation
- Explain dual meaning of "reason" (matching/existence)
- Introduce raison d'être concept and difference from #[Inject]
- Focus on delegation pattern for state realization

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- Add Edison quotation about meaningful failure
- Restructure to match Japanese version organization
- Add structured data explanation for domain exceptions
- Simplify automatic error collection example
- Remove verbose sections (logging, testing, dev/prod)
- Maintain core message: from problem reporting to problem resolution

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- Expand structured data usage examples (display, API, AI analysis)
- Simplify conclusion quotation for better clarity
- Maintain consistency between Japanese and English versions

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Docs rewritten across multiple manuals to shift examples from single-path destiny to multi-type Be-driven flows, introduce a Reason Layer with reason objects, reframe error handling toward domain exceptions, convert a function example into a pre/postcondition class, overhaul semantic logging, and reorganize navigation and philosophy/resource pages.

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Cohort / File(s) Summary of changes
Type-driven metamorphosis (EN/JA)
manuals/1.0/en/07-type-driven-metamorphosis.md, manuals/1.0/ja/07-type-driven-metamorphosis.md
Replaces single-destiny examples with multi-type #[Be(...)] selections. Adds/renames public examples: PaymentAttempt (`Success
Reason Layer rewrite (EN/JA)
manuals/1.0/en/08-reason-layer.md, manuals/1.0/ja/08-reason-layer.md
Reframes two senses of “reason” (type-matching vs raison d’être). Adds public classes/samples: BeGreeting, FormalGreeting, FormalStyle, CasualStyle, ValidatedUser (renamed from FormattedGreeting), and SavedUser. Replaces DI-tool examples with delegation via Reason objects; updates constructors, method names, namespaces, and public properties.
Error handling (EN)
manuals/1.0/en/09-error-handling.md
Shifts to domain-centric failures. Renames exceptions (InvalidEmailFormatException→InvalidEmailException, AgeOutOfRangeException→AgeTooYoungException), exposes structured data on exceptions, adds multilingual #[Message(...)] attributes, changes UserValidation constructor and adds #[Be([ValidUser::class, InvalidUser::class])], and demonstrates aggregated SemanticVariableException.
Semantic variables (EN)
manuals/1.0/en/06-semantic-variables.md
Replaces a function example with final class ProcessedOrder. Constructor parameters express preconditions via attributes (#[Input], #[Verified], #[Adult]); public readonly postconditions added (orderNumber, processedAt).
Semantic logging docs (EN)
manuals/1.0/en/11-semantic-logging.md, manuals/1.0/en/10-semantic-logging.md
Overhauls logging docs: new 10-semantic-logging.md introduces semantic metamorphosis logging and Koriym.SemanticLogger integration; 11-... rewritten to a foundation-focused model, replacing open/close event examples with a single from/to metamorphosis object.
Navigation and index (EN)
manuals/1.0/en/index.md
Reorganizes site navigation: renames and retargets sections (Metamorphosis, Semantic Logging, Reference), removes previous section 12, updates closing quote/motto.
Philosophy pages (EN/JA)
manuals/1.0/en/12-philosophy-behind.md, manuals/1.0/ja/12-philosophy-behind.md
EN front-matter retitled/categorized/permalinked; JA adds a new philosophical article with YAML front matter and example classes showing existential programming concepts.
Reference resources (EN)
manuals/1.0/en/11-reference-resources.md
Adds a new Reference page listing official repositories and development resources with YAML front matter and curated links.

Sequence Diagram(s)

sequenceDiagram
  autonumber
  actor User
  participant PaymentAttempt
  participant PaymentGateway
  participant Being as Success/Failure
  participant NextStep

  User->>PaymentAttempt: new(amount, card, gateway)
  PaymentAttempt->>PaymentGateway: process(amount, card)
  PaymentGateway-->>PaymentAttempt: Result (ok|error)
  alt Result successful
    PaymentAttempt->>Being: new Success(result)
  else Result failed
    PaymentAttempt->>Being: new Failure(error)
  end
  PaymentAttempt-->>User: being: Success|Failure
  Note over PaymentAttempt,Being: Be([Success, Failure]) selects next type
  opt Continuation
    User->>NextStep: new(Success being)
    NextStep-->>User: next action initialized
  end
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sequenceDiagram
  autonumber
  actor Caller
  participant BeGreeting
  participant Style as CasualStyle/FormalStyle
  participant FormalGreeting

  Caller->>BeGreeting: new(name, styleStr)
  BeGreeting->>Style: select by styleStr
  BeGreeting-->>Caller: being: CasualStyle|FormalStyle
  alt Formal path
    Caller->>FormalGreeting: new(name, FormalStyle being)
    FormalGreeting-->>Caller: greeting, businessCard
  else Casual path
    Caller->>Style: casualGreeting(name)
    Style-->>Caller: greeting/message
  end
  Note over BeGreeting,Style: Reason for type matching (style)
  Note over FormalGreeting,Style: Reason for existence (delegation)
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sequenceDiagram
  autonumber
  actor Client
  participant UserValidation
  participant Outcome as ValidUser/InvalidUser
  participant Errors as SemanticVariableException

  Client->>UserValidation: new(data)
  UserValidation-->>Client: being: ValidUser|InvalidUser
  alt InvalidUser
    Client->>Errors: catch()
    Errors-->>Client: getMessages('en'), structured fields
  end
  Note over UserValidation: #[Be([ValidUser, InvalidUser])]
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manuals/1.0/en/09-error-handling.md (3)

24-31: Align sample messages with exception content.

InvalidEmailException formats the email into the message, but the comments show a generic text. Update comments to avoid confusion.

-        // EmptyNameException: Name cannot be empty
-        // InvalidEmailException: Invalid email format
+        // EmptyNameException: Name cannot be empty.
+        // InvalidEmailException: Invalid email format: invalid-email

60-73: Consider PII-safe logging.

Logging raw emails can be sensitive. Prefer masking/hash before logging.

-    $logData = [
-        'invalid_email' => $e->invalidEmail,    // Programmatically accessible
+    $logData = [
+        'invalid_email' => substr($e->invalidEmail, 0, 2) . '***', // mask PII
         'user_ip' => $request->getClientIp(),
         'timestamp' => now()
     ];

102-112: Keep collected error messages consistent with exception messages.

Reflect the formatted email and age wording.

-    $messages = $e->getErrors()->getMessages('en');
-    // ["Name cannot be empty", "Invalid email format", "Age must be at least 13"]
+    $messages = $e->getErrors()->getMessages('en');
+    // ["Name cannot be empty.",
+    //  "Invalid email format: invalid-email",
+    //  "Age insufficient: 10 years (minimum 13 years)."]
manuals/1.0/ja/07-type-driven-metamorphosis.md (2)

51-53: Close the illustrative snippet to avoid reader confusion.

Add closing braces/ellipsis.

-class NextStep {
-    public function __construct(#[Input] Success $being) {
+class NextStep {
+    public function __construct(#[Input] Success $being) {
+        // ...
+    }
+}

84-86: Align continuation example with current entity name.

Earlier in this chapter the input class is PaymentAttempt; replace UserInput.

-$evaluation = $becoming(new UserInput($data));
+$evaluation = $becoming(new PaymentAttempt($data));
manuals/1.0/en/08-reason-layer.md (4)

23-36: Clarify class resolution by importing namespaced styles.

Earlier, styles are defined under App\Reason\. Add imports so the snippet is copy-pasteable.

+use App\Reason\FormalStyle;
+use App\Reason\CasualStyle;
+
 final class BeGreeting
 {
     public readonly CasualStyle|FormalStyle $being;

44-57: Same import clarity for FormalGreeting snippet.

+use App\Reason\FormalStyle;
+
 final class FormalGreeting
 {

126-146: Good contrast vs DI; tiny property hint.

Optionally declare $result for completeness.

 public function __construct(
     #[Input] string $email,
     #[Input] UserValidationReason $reason    // Related tools bundled as reason for existence
 ) {
-    // A complete tool set for becoming ValidatedUser is provided
-    $this->result = $reason->validateUser($email, $this);
+    // A complete tool set for becoming ValidatedUser is provided
+    $this->result = $reason->validateUser($email, $this);
 }

And consider preceding the snippet with:

public readonly mixed $result;

162-172: Same optional $result declaration note for SavedUser.

manuals/1.0/ja/08-reason-layer.md (4)

23-36: 明示的にスタイルクラスをインポートしてください。

前節で App\Reason\ 名前空間に定義しているため、読み手の混乱を避けるために use を追加するのが無難です。

+use App\Reason\FormalStyle;
+use App\Reason\CasualStyle;
+
 final class BeGreeting
 {

44-57: FormalGreeting でも同様に import を追加。

+use App\Reason\FormalStyle;
+
 final class FormalGreeting
 {

139-146: $result の宣言を補足(任意)。


162-172: SavedUser でも $result の宣言補足(任意)。

manuals/1.0/en/07-type-driven-metamorphosis.md (1)

82-84: Use PaymentAttempt consistently in continuation sample.

UserInput isn’t introduced in this chapter; align naming.

-$evaluation = $becoming(new UserInput($data));
+$evaluation = $becoming(new PaymentAttempt($data));
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1-6: Front matter/layout/permalink look correct.

Matches docs-en and .html permalink guideline.


43-57: LGTM on structured domain exception examples.

Clear use of readonly promoted properties and meaningful messages.


144-147: Cross-link OK.

Points to .html and matches guideline.

manuals/1.0/ja/07-type-driven-metamorphosis.md (2)

19-35: LGTM on multi-destination PaymentAttempt example.

Clear union type and branching; aligns EN doc.


140-143: Cross-link OK.

Uses .html and correct locale.

manuals/1.0/en/08-reason-layer.md (2)

67-94: LGTM on reason classes.

Consistent namespace and methods; examples read well.


180-182: Cross-link OK.

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67-94: LGTM

名前空間・メソッドの整合性が取れています。


180-183: リンク OK(.html 拡張子)。

manuals/1.0/en/07-type-driven-metamorphosis.md (2)

17-35: PaymentAttempt example reads well.

Union types and gateway branching are clear.


138-141: Cross-link OK.

Points to .html as required.

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## Chapter Structure Changes
- Reorder: Philosophy (10→12), Doing-to-Being (12→10), keep Logging (11)
- Hide philosophy chapter from main navigation (accessible via Chapter 10 link)
- Update all cross-references and navigation

## Semantic Variables Improvements
- Add "Design by Contract" section with preconditions/postconditions
- Fix contradictory function example (use constructors instead)
- Align with Be Framework principles (names carry constraints, not types)

## Content Updates
- Simplify Chapter 11 (Semantic Logging) structure
- Update index.md descriptions to match new content
- Fix Chapter 5 title reference (Metamorphosis Patterns → Metamorphosis)
- Add philosophy chapter links in both languages

## Navigation Flow
- Main flow: Chapters 1-11 (accessible to all readers)
- Optional: Chapter 12 Philosophy (for interested readers via Chapter 10)
- Better learning curve: practical → paradigm shift → tools → philosophy

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- Fixed function signature contradictions to align with Be Framework principles
- Added Design by Contract section with proper constructor-based examples
- Improved tag constraints to modify rather than duplicate names
- Restructured chapters 10-12 to hide philosophy from main navigation
- Updated error handling and semantic logging chapters
- Maintained consistent bilingual documentation structure

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- Added explicit path exclusion in navigation templates
- Philosophy chapter remains accessible via direct links from Chapter 10

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manuals/1.0/en/09-error-handling.md (2)

51-58: Duplicate/conflicting AgeTooYoungException definitions — unify to one structured version.

There are two definitions: one with (age, min) and another with only (min). Keep the structured (age, min) version and update the Message block to match placeholders.

 #[Message([
-    'en' => 'Age must be at least {min} years.',
-    'ja' => '年齢は最低{min}歳でなければなりません。'
+    'en' => 'Age insufficient: {age} years (minimum {min} years).',
+    'ja' => '年齢が不足しています:{age}歳(最低{min}歳)。'
 ])]
-final class AgeTooYoungException extends DomainException
-{
-    public function __construct(public readonly int $min = 13) {}
-}
+final class AgeTooYoungException extends DomainException
+{
+    public function __construct(public readonly int $age, public readonly int $min = 13) {}
+}

Also applies to: 87-95


127-134: Standardize on SemanticVariableException in the example.

Constructor catch block uses ValidationException; the doc elsewhere uses SemanticVariableException. Standardize for consistency.

-        } catch (ValidationException $e) {
+        } catch (SemanticVariableException $e) {
             $this->being = new InvalidUser($e->getErrors());
         }
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manuals/1.0/en/06-semantic-variables.md (1)

233-249: Tighten the ProcessedOrder example: DateTimeImmutable, FQCNs, and a helper stub.

  • Prefer DateTimeImmutable for truly immutable postconditions and prefix with a leading backslash (or add a use) to avoid namespace surprises.
  • Minor clarity: include a private generateOrderNumber() stub.
-final class ProcessedOrder
+final class ProcessedOrder
 {
-    public function __construct(
+    public function __construct(
         #[Input] #[Verified] string $productCode,    // Precondition: verified product code
         #[Input] int $paymentAmount,                 // Precondition: payment amount
         #[Input] #[Adult] int $age                   // Precondition: adult age
     ) {
         // Can only exist when preconditions are satisfied
-        $this->orderNumber = $this->generateOrderNumber();
-        $this->processedAt = new DateTime();
+        $this->orderNumber = $this->generateOrderNumber();
+        $this->processedAt = new \DateTimeImmutable();
     }
     
     public readonly string $orderNumber;    // Postcondition: order number always exists
-    public readonly DateTime $processedAt;  // Postcondition: processed time always exists
+    public readonly \DateTimeImmutable $processedAt;  // Postcondition: processed time always exists
+
+    /** @return non-empty-string */
+    private function generateOrderNumber(): string
+    {
+        return 'ORD-' . bin2hex(random_bytes(6));
+    }
 }
manuals/1.0/en/11-semantic-logging.md (3)

19-34: Use jsonc for illustrative JSON-with-comments.

The snippet contains line comments; tag the fence as jsonc to avoid confusing tooling/readers expecting strict JSON.

-```php
+```php
 // Object metamorphosis...
 #[Be(RegisteredUser::class)]
 final class UserInput { /* ... */ }
 
 final class RegisteredUser { /* ... */ }
 
-// Automatically recorded as structured logs
-{
+// Automatically recorded as structured logs
+```jsonc
+{
   "metamorphosis": {
     "from": "UserInput",
     "to": "RegisteredUser",
     // Complete metamorphosis information...
   }
 }
-```
+```

36-44: Minor narrative mismatch: Open/Event/Close vs single metamorphosis object.

Earlier text emphasizes a single “metamorphosis” record. If Open/Event/Close is still foundational (per Koriym.SemanticLogger), add a bridging sentence to clarify how it yields the single metamorphosis object in Be.


58-58: Consider adding “Next” navigation for consistency.

Other chapters end with a Next link. Add a link back to the index or to a related chapter (e.g., Error Handling) to keep navigation uniform.

manuals/1.0/en/09-error-handling.md (3)

24-31: Align inline comments with updated messages.

Examples show “Invalid email format” but the class now formats “Invalid email format: {invalidEmail}”. Update the illustrative comments for consistency.

-        // EmptyNameException: Name cannot be empty
-        // InvalidEmailException: Invalid email format
+        // EmptyNameException: Name cannot be empty.
+        // InvalidEmailException: Invalid email format: invalid-email@example.com

65-73: Avoid framework-specific helpers; prefer DateTimeImmutable.

now() isn’t a PHP core function. Use DateTimeImmutable or an ISO8601 string for portability.

-    $logData = [
+    $logData = [
         'invalid_email' => $e->invalidEmail,    // Programmatically accessible
-        'user_ip' => $request->getClientIp(),
-        'timestamp' => now()
+        'user_ip' => $request->getClientIp(),
+        'timestamp' => (new \DateTimeImmutable())->format(DATE_ATOM)
     ];

102-112: Tune the collected messages to match class messages.

Adjust the example messages to reflect the new InvalidEmailException and AgeTooYoungException formats.

-    // ["Name cannot be empty", "Invalid email format", "Age must be at least 13"]
+    // ["Name cannot be empty.", "Invalid email format: invalid-email", "Age insufficient: 10 years (minimum 13 years)."]
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251-252: Clear and consistent DBC exposition.

The preconditions/postconditions framing is crisp and aligns with the earlier narrative. No changes needed.

manuals/1.0/en/10-from-doing-to-being-final.md (2)

3-6: Front matter and permalink OK.

layout is docs-en and permalink uses .html per guidelines. Index updates in en/index.md reflect the new numbering. LGTM.


123-124: Link target exists; layout correct.
Verified manuals/1.0/en/12-philosophy-behind.md exists and its front matter uses layout: docs-en (permalink /manuals/1.0/en/12-philosophy-behind.html).

manuals/1.0/en/index.md (2)

24-26: Section 5 rename aligns with the new narrative.

Link uses .html and the subtitle matches the metamorphosis emphasis. No action needed.


39-44: Navigation updates look good — no .md links found in manuals/1.0/en/

Ran rg -nP '[[^\]]+]([^)]+.md)' manuals/1.0/en; no matches.

manuals/1.0/en/11-semantic-logging.md (1)

10-18: Good high-level positioning.

The Overview/Basic Concept contrast is clear and consistent with the PR’s metamorphosis theme.

manuals/1.0/en/09-error-handling.md (1)

1-6: Front matter and permalink OK.

layout is docs-en; permalink uses .html. Good.

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manuals/1.0/ja/12-philosophy-behind.md (2)

74-76: Terminology correction: 企投性 → 投企性

Heidegger term in Japanese is “投企性”. Minor but important for accuracy.

Apply:

-// 企投性:未来への可能性
+// 投企性:未来への可能性

412-412: Fix markdownlint: fenced code block without language (MD040)

There’s a dangling fence at the end of the file; remove it (or ensure any fence has a language).

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1-6: Approve — front matter and English counterpart verified.
Japanese file front matter and placement are correct; English counterpart manuals/1.0/en/12-philosophy-behind.md uses layout: docs-en and a matching .html permalink.

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- Moved Semantic Logging from Chapter 11 to Chapter 10
- Moved Reference & Development Resources from Chapter 10 to Chapter 11 (final)
- Updated all permalinks and chapter titles
- Updated index pages in both languages
- Reference chapter now serves as final practical resource collection
- Added concept documentation links for both Japanese and English versions

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47-47: Fix markdownlint MD036: use blockquote instead of italicized “heading-like” line.
Switch the closing tagline to a blockquote to satisfy the linter.

-*"In Be Framework, we don't make objects do things. We create the conditions for them to become what they already are, in their deepest nature."*
+> "In Be Framework, we don't make objects do things. We create the conditions for them to become what they already are, in their deepest nature."
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39-41: Section 10 updated to “Semantic Logging” with correct .html link.
Consistent with the new page and description.


42-44: Section 11 “Reference & Development Resources” looks good.
Naming and link conform to guidelines.

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39-44: New Sections 10–11: check targets exist and have correct frontmatter.

Ensure 10-semantic-logging.md and 11-reference-resources.md exist with layout: docs-en (11 is present in this PR).

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mapfile -t links < <(rg -nP '\[[^\]]+\]\(([0-9]{2}[-a-z0-9/]+)\.html\)' -r '$1' "$file" | awk -F: '{print $2}')
for base in "${links[@]}"; do
  md="manuals/1.0/en/${base}.md"
  if [[ ! -f "$md" ]]; then
    echo "Missing page: $md" >&2
  else
    rg -nP '^\s*layout:\s*docs-en\b' "$md" >/dev/null || echo "Frontmatter layout not docs-en: $md"
  fi
done
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manuals/1.0/en/11-reference-resources.md (2)

39-41: Style: use blockquote for closing aphorism and add terminal period.

Aligns with earlier quote and satisfies MD036.

-In Be Framework, we don't make objects do things. We create the conditions for them to become what they already are, in their deepest nature.
-
-*\"Programming is not about instructing actions—it's about expressing existence.\"*
+> In Be Framework, we don't make objects do things. We create the conditions for them to become what they already are, in their deepest nature.
+>
+> "Programming is not about instructing actions—it's about expressing existence."

41-41: Add trailing newline.

Prevents “No newline at end of file” git artifact.

-*"Programming is not about instructing actions—it's about expressing existence."*
+*"Programming is not about instructing actions—it's about expressing existence."*
+
manuals/1.0/en/index.md (1)

47-47: Style: make the closing aphorism a blockquote for consistency.

Matches quote style used elsewhere.

-*"In Be Framework, we don't make objects do things. We create the conditions for them to become what they already are, in their deepest nature."*
+> "In Be Framework, we don't make objects do things. We create the conditions for them to become what they already are, in their deepest nature."
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1-6: Frontmatter and permalink look correct.

Matches guidelines: layout: docs-en and .html permalink.


31-36: Verify internal links resolve and frontmatter layout

Frontmatter must use layout: docs-en (project policy).

Files to check:

  • manuals/1.0/en/convention/naming-standards.md
  • manuals/1.0/en/12-philosophy-behind.md

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grep -nE '^[[:space:]]layout[[:space:]]:[[:space:]]*"?docs-en"?' manuals/1.0/en/convention/naming-standards.md manuals/1.0/en/12-philosophy-behind.md

If a file is missing or its frontmatter is not layout: docs-en, either update the link in manuals/1.0/en/11-reference-resources.md to the correct path or add the missing .md with frontmatter layout: docs-en.

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24-26: Section 5 rename LGTM.

Title/slug use .html and follow structure.

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24-25: Ensure linked target pages exist (EN/JA) and have correct frontmatter.

Links use .html (good), but please verify the corresponding Markdown sources exist and have correct layout per language for:

  • 05-metamorphosis
  • 10-semantic-logging
  • 11-reference-resources
  • 07-type-driven-metamorphosis
  • 08-reason-layer
  • 09-error-handling

Also confirm no .md cross-links slipped in and that JA pages mirror structure with layout: docs-ja.

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#!/bin/bash
set -euo pipefail

status=0
for lang in en ja; do
  layout="docs-${lang}"
  for page in 05-metamorphosis 07-type-driven-metamorphosis 08-reason-layer 09-error-handling 10-semantic-logging 11-reference-resources; do
    file=$(fd -t f -a "manuals/1.0/${lang}/${page}.md" || true)
    if [[ -z "${file}" ]]; then
      echo "Missing manuals/1.0/${lang}/${page}.md" >&2
      status=1
      continue
    fi
    if ! rg -nP "^\s*layout:\s*${layout}\b" "$file" >/dev/null; then
      echo "Layout not set to ${layout} in ${file}" >&2
      status=1
    fi
  done
done

# No .md links in EN index
if rg -nP '\]\([^)]+\.md\)' manuals/1.0/en/index.md; then
  echo "ERROR: index has .md links" >&2
  status=1
else
  echo "OK: index uses .html links"
fi

exit $status

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47-47: Fix markdownlint MD036: render motto as a quote, not emphasis.

-*"Be, Don't Do"*
+> "Be, Don't Do"
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Added memory/truth quote inspired by Orwell to introduce the concept of semantic logging as meaningful record-keeping.

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@claude @coderabbitai 印象的な部分はありましたか

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@koriym はい、このPRには非常に印象的な部分がいくつかありました:

最も印象的な点

1. 哲学的深度の統合

  • 老子、ライプニッツ、エジソンの引用が各章に追加され、技術的概念と哲学的洞察が見事に結合されている
  • 特に第8章での「理由」の二重の意味(型マッチングの理由と存在の理由)の概念化が秀逸

2. アーキテクチャの根本的変革

  • 第7章で単一運命モデルから複数型選択モデル(#[Be([Success::class, Failure::class])])への転換
  • UserInput → PaymentAttempt のような具体的なドメイン指向への進化

3. 意味的例外処理の革新

  • 第9章でジェネリック例外から意味のある失敗(InvalidEmailException, AgeTooYoungException)への転換
  • 構造化データを持つドメイン例外により、プログラマティックなアクセスが可能に

4. 日英版の一貫性向上

  • 両言語版の構造と内容の整合性が大幅に改善
  • 文化的な違いを保ちながら、コンセプトの統一性を実現

5. 実用と思想の調和

  • 抽象的な哲学概念が具体的なPHPコード例に落とし込まれている
  • raison d'être(存在理由)という概念が実際のクラス設計に反映

このPRは単なるドキュメント更新を超えて、Be Frameworkの哲学的基盤を強化し、より深い理解を促す素晴らしい改善だと感じました。

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