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Reframes the home page around "unwinding enclosures", in a plainer, non-activist voice (EN and DE). Builds on the earlier team and partners tidy-ups already in this branch.

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  • Hero: kinetic "Enclosures, unwound" headline and a co-creation subhead (communities, public authorities and funders). Comma poem and sensing/action moved off the hero, staged for the About page.
  • Intro: collective framing; architects, researchers, economists, technologists, facilitators and community builders; unlock framing.
  • Why: enclosure and exclosure, with the term exclosure linked to Jessy Kate Schingler.
  • Approach: the place-to-pattern-to-mechanism cycle, then Mechanism design strategies (three cards) and Technology as its own block.
  • Collective and Advisors intros rewritten; section titles set in Silkscreen.
  • Earlier in the branch: removed Oxford Brookes from partners; added Franz to the team; British English copy.

Not in this PR (increment 2): Activities section, populated Initiatives, and a real About page (team grid + comma close).

For Charlie to review before merging to master.

Add Franz Josef Allmayer between Charlie and Clara in the team grid.
Replace partners marquee with a still flex-wrap layout and add Oxford
Brookes University, Impact Hub, and SOAM logos. Convert remaining
American spellings to British English across team bios and home copy
(neighbourhoods, centres, decentralised, human-centred, incentivisation,
organisation/organisations, optimising, emphasising, utilise,
self-organisation).

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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@cgromaches cgromaches changed the title Home: add Franz to team, still partners row, British English copy Home: add team members, still partners row, British English copy May 20, 2026
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Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Lead with the outcome (unwinding enclosures) in a plainer, non-activist voice, across EN and DE.

- Hero: kinetic 'Enclosures, unwound' headline and a co-creation subhead (communities, public authorities and funders); comma poem and sensing/action moved off the hero, staged for About.
- Intro: collective framing; architects, researchers, economists, technologists, facilitators and community builders; unlock framing.
- Why: enclosure and exclosure, with the term exclosure linked to Jessy Kate Schingler.
- Approach: the place-to-pattern-to-mechanism cycle, then Mechanism design strategies (three cards, de-jargoned) and Technology as its own block.
- Collective and Advisors intros rewritten; section titles set in Silkscreen.
- Kinetic unwind animation added to globals.css.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
@cgromaches cgromaches changed the title Home: add team members, still partners row, British English copy Home: narrative reframe (unwinding enclosures), with team and partners updates May 28, 2026
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